Monday, March 5, 2012
Lance - E-books online
We believe E-books motivate children because of the music. The music sets the scene. I like E-books because they are fun to use. E-books might change schools because all children who use them will need a computer.
Whetu E-books online
We think e-books may be a lot cheaper then buying a book. How might it change schools?
E-books might change schools because all children who use them will need a computer.
E-books may change schools because they can be a good or bad .
Winston E-books online
We think E-books may be a lot cheaper then buying books. How might it change schools? They could be bad because they might have bad language and they might make children lazy by not reading and just listening.
Koare E-books online
We believe E-books will be useful in the future because we won't need to carry so many books. They might change schools because all of the children who use them will need a computer and they are very expensive.
Monday, February 27, 2012
Kiarn - Predictions
1) I predict I will do my Home work on Tuesday. Kiarn, homework does not need a capital because it is in the middle of your sentence and it is not a noun. Rewrite correctly.
1a) I predict I will do my homework on Tuesday.
Well that looks much better Kiarn. Remember your whainga paetae! Whaea Raina
Denzell - Predictions
1) I predict that tomorrow night that me and mum are going to KFC. Try writing your sentence like this: 'I predict that tomorrow night mum and I will go to KFC. Whaea Raina
2) I predict that in the night I will have a good sleep.
Ka pai koe Denzell! You have put capital letters and full stops in the right places. Well done!
Unique - Predictions
1) I predict that it is going to be sunny on tuesday. Tuesday has a capital letter. Please rewrite your sentence.
1a) I predict that it is going to be sunny on Tuesday. Ka pay Unique!
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